Black Poetry : Permission (revised)

[angelicsage]

copyright 2004

 

[Randee]

If I may be permitted to tell you this is one of your best!

Across the scenery of your
Landscapes,…… may I yet rise
Brilliantly beaming, penetrating your sky
And at the close of the each day
May I slowly…….. diminish
As the sun would set
Painting endless arrays
of blushing passion, culminating senses

I have never read such beauty before. Thats why you are the port of the week!

 

[j'hiah]

you are going to have to stop taking my breath away, seriously.
girl...l'm sending you p.m on this one....

*whoa*

 

[Khasm13]

i agree with randee
you musta ate your wheaties or sumtin
this is outasite
the essence of love is so entrenched
in this piece, it's hard to not feel it
even if you just got dumped by the love of your life
dis is truely a mastapiece
peace
khasm

 

[gempis]

This is absolutely off the chain, angelicsage. And may I be permitted to say, whomever you love is so very lucky to have you.