Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Aug 14, 2003.
If I may be permitted to tell you this is one of your best!
Across the scenery of your
Landscapes,…… may I yet rise
Brilliantly beaming, penetrating your sky
And at the close of the each day
May I slowly…….. diminish
As the sun would set
Painting endless arrays
of blushing passion, culminating senses
I have never read such beauty before. Thats why you are the port of the week!
you are going to have to stop taking my breath away, seriously.
girl...l'm sending you p.m on this one....
i agree with randee
you musta ate your wheaties or sumtin
this is outasite
the essence of love is so entrenched
in this piece, it's hard to not feel it
even if you just got dumped by the love of your life
dis is truely a mastapiece
This is absolutely off the chain, angelicsage. And may I be permitted to say, whomever you love is so very lucky to have you.
i loved this one angelic-one, dis is off the hook!
angelicsage my sistah
smooth ..so smooth
you are deep
Randee, permission granted and If I may be permitted to give you a
Big hug… ………Thank you!
J’hiah, your too good to me, ya know what it means if I stop taking
Your breath away, right………it means your freely giving it, lol
Seriously, Thank you for all the luv and support you’ve shown
This week….you wowed me……glad I could return the favor!
Angelicsage Ps...I'll be lookin for that pm
Khasm, “Wheaties” , your so funny………your words
Let me know that the essence of what I attempt to paint
Is there……..I also see from your last remark that you not
Only read my work but you hear my voice……..
Thank you for that,
Gempis, off the chain? Wow, and you may be permitted to say…
Yeah…whoever I love should be so lucky, if they only knew,
Or rather understood……..Thank you for the props!
Story, thank you coming from a poet who is equally “off the hook”
Always taking us on those cerebrally cosmic journeys within ur words.
Bluewater, …..your words touch me, I don’t really know how “deep”
I am but I have been told…I just don’t see it, although I feel it.
Your presence is appreciated………Thanks, Angelicsage
Girl... you have my permission...lol. This is sooo beautiful, smooth, hot, tyte, its what everyone said it is. Honestly, I think this one is my fav. yup its my fav one of all ur masterpieces.
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