Black Poetry : Permission (revised)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Aug 14, 2003.

  1. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    copyright 2004
     
  2. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If I may be permitted to tell you this is one of your best!

    Across the scenery of your
    Landscapes,…… may I yet rise
    Brilliantly beaming, penetrating your sky
    And at the close of the each day
    May I slowly…….. diminish
    As the sun would set
    Painting endless arrays
    of blushing passion, culminating senses

    I have never read such beauty before. Thats why you are the port of the week!
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you are going to have to stop taking my breath away, seriously.
    girl...l'm sending you p.m on this one....

    *whoa*
     
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    i agree with randee
    you musta ate your wheaties or sumtin
    this is outasite
    the essence of love is so entrenched
    in this piece, it's hard to not feel it
    even if you just got dumped by the love of your life
    dis is truely a mastapiece
    peace
    khasm
     
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    This is absolutely off the chain, angelicsage. And may I be permitted to say, whomever you love is so very lucky to have you.
     
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    i loved this one angelic-one, dis is off the hook!
    much love,
    -story
     
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    angelicsage my sistah
    smooth ..so smooth
    you are deep
    wonderful
    Peace
     
  8. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Randee, permission granted and If I may be permitted to give you a
    Big hug…:grouphug: ………Thank you!



    J’hiah, your too good to me, ya know what it means if I stop taking
    Your breath away, right………it means your freely giving it, lol
    Seriously, Thank you for all the luv and support you’ve shown
    This week….you wowed me……glad I could return the favor!
    Much luv,
    Angelicsage Ps...I'll be lookin for that pm:huh:



    Khasm, “Wheaties” , your so funny………your words
    Let me know that the essence of what I attempt to paint
    Is there……..I also see from your last remark that you not
    Only read my work but you hear my voice……..
    Thank you for that,
    Peace
    Angelic
     
  9. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gempis, off the chain? Wow, and you may be permitted to say…
    Yeah…whoever I love should be so lucky, if they only knew,
    Or rather understood……..Thank you for the props!



    Story, thank you coming from a poet who is equally “off the hook”
    Always taking us on those cerebrally cosmic journeys within ur words.
    Peace, Angelic



    Bluewater, …..your words touch me, I don’t really know how “deep”
    I am but I have been told…I just don’t see it, although I feel it.
    Your presence is appreciated………Thanks, Angelicsage
     
  10. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl... you have my permission...lol. This is sooo beautiful, smooth, hot, tyte, its what everyone said it is. Honestly, I think this one is my fav. yup its my fav one of all ur masterpieces.
     
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