Quiet Poetry Lounge : Period Of Meditation

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticdelight, Oct 3, 2001.

  1. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    sometimes the ink doesn't flow
    directly from the mind in a straight dotted line
    all is fine when i start to rhyme

    in a world solely defined by time
    declining solid red lines of tape
    we can't escape what we await

    destiny and fate hopes dreams and aspirations
    make me meditate

    check the expiration date it's not too late
    far ahead of the game wipe clean the slate

    overcoming fear and feelings of hate
    mildew and residue build much debate
    can't escape what we rightfully await

    destiny and fate hopes dreams and aspirations
    making me meditate






    apt copyright 2001
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    PD

    in the other corner i sit in medatation long side u
    soon the lights will come on !:kiss:
     
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    feelin you sista'. definately feelin'ya!!!
     
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    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    by the way...

    i posted this in the wrong column

    sorry :(

    lmao

    pd
     
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    LMAO

    Your poem be tight to def.. but you know you had me rollin when i went down and read that you posted it in the wrong forum... For a minute their i thought you were talking about waiting and meditatiing on this Anthology we waiting to happen... But it is tight.... And i definitely enjoyed the read!!! Moving back over to the forum column though... :x:
     
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    pd

    This was beautiful! I noticed that you wrote you had posted it in the wrong forum (as it was in the Anthology area) so I moved it for you! I know I'm a bit late with the move, but I just seen it this morning! Great work ... it actually seemed fitting in the Anthology area.... as it seems we have sort of fell into a lull with that? I did email verb and asked him to "give us a sign" or something!! :lol:
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my girl.
     
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    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this scribe is tight!!!! i feel you..we cannot escape what we await.

    lo ' (JHBSA)
     
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    why do i feel this today more then ever seem like i'm in a maze lost....
     
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