Quiet Poetry Lounge : Perfectness

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Apr 24, 2002.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There is a thing called perfectness
    Found in a lover's happiness
    When they've let it all go
    Caring not, if it is the right decision
    Accepting the blindness
    Seen only through a lover's vision

    Perfectness
    Unlike lonliness
    Two lovers with a single heart
    Bringing about
    Togetherness

    Perfectness
    A lover's smile
    Internal and external thoughtfulness
    The way their love is made
    Ahhhh
    Breathless

    Perfectness
    At the foundation
    Respectfulness
    Eternal closeness
    Loving completness
    Yes...perfect

    BE
    (c) 2002
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you continue to inspire

    there is a thing called completeness
    that defies the bounds of languages
    that defines the mysteries of the ages
    in its pure and simple loveliness
    but it must be felt....

    there is a thing called wholeness...
    when two uneven halves
    move ameba-like through the maze of
    circumstances, meet, and meld
    into perfect symmetry....

    this is fusion at its best
    physics at its peak
    a beauty
    untouched
    unmatched and
    incalculable
    by
    pythagorean theorums
    or logarithms

    ohhhhhhhhhhh much
    higher than any
    mathematical
    expression
    far greater than
    any musical
    composition

    longer and stronger than any
    measured time
    held by that single
    note

    it's at the heart of the
    rhythm
    deep inside the beat

    completeness.....

    (thanks...again)

    alyce
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    HEARTBEAT U HAVE PERFECTED IT SO WELL DA MAN OF LOVE ....
     
  4. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now I know my little poem can't be the cause of alladat Ms A. However, I am digging your response...Poetic perfectness.

    BE