Black Poetry : PERFECTION!

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  1. Timmytim04

    Timmytim04 Member MEMBER

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    rough draft...let me know what u think

    perfection
    Those 3 words I told u last night never felt so good!!
    Im over you!!
    **** is beautiful
    Cuz she took me for granted
    Thought cuz she was in magazines light skin with eyes slanted
    Id never get the nerve 2 leave
    Id pack up all her shirt and all she do was tug on my sleve
    “U know we forever right so why u getting all mad”
    And at times she was truly the best I ever had
    Is hard to give up something as powerful as her kiss
    Some type of drug was laced on her bottem lips
    But now I Have faith in God that he’s gonna return me my rib
    Cuz my heart use 2 feed 4 u
    And my lungs use 2 breathe u
    My Body use 2 need you
    And ud threaten 2 leave So I pleaded with you
    And yea at times the love was great
    But the bad times is that whipped that all away
    Being with a beautiful woman helped me thru my depression
    But im wholel man now and I learned my lesson
    Im Strong again a completely different person
    I did myself a service
    U came 2 me when I was at my lowest
    I had **** ****** up
    Found my worth in your love and ur beauty
    And I could handle ur anger as long as u clapped that booty
    but u see what’s ever created in sin perishes under gods son
    so basically we was ****** before we even begun
    and whats sad at first I really thought u might be the one
    but the down fall to every great man is a woman
    and I didn’t make this **** up it’s proven
    but at the same time beside every great king is a even greater queen
    so that’s what im searching for from now on

    something only a few men have seen
    Perfection! Mentally physically emotionally Perfection
    Someond deserving of my God Like affection perfection
    Someone 2 help Guide my in the right direction perfection
    Absolute Perfection!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i surely can relate to this and been to the mountain top to see perfection
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A beautiful outer shell is lovely to look at, but if that's all you have, you'll be found wanting. Got to go for that depth. She'll appear, not without flaws, but perfect for you.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yo i feel you poet

    don't let stuff mess you up totally

    you grow you learn you what you like what you don't like

    and hope you can great your dream or standard of what you're looking for

    and if that can happen

    then it's really

    all good


    peace
     
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    Phenomenon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    But now I Have faith in God that he’s gonna return me my rib (My Fav Line) Beautiful work
     
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