Black Poetry : ...perfection...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MsDLite, Feb 4, 2003.

  1. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i ain’t neva said i was perfect...
    this i heard about you 2...

    ...but then...
    you be of mandinka
    and the “royalness” of your
    blackness be perfect 2 me...
    ...i love me some...

    ...and you whispered...
    ...“you be gambia, my sweet west africa...”

    you met my river...
    crossed my terrain...
    finding my...
    and...

    then...

    interjections...
    perspiration...
    inspiration...
    reflection...
    our perfection...


    MsDLite © 02.03
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    smiles........sweetie dis was simply beautiful
    a well known perfectional vibe u scrbes

    mo!
     
  3. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $R...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Be my Valentine ..........miss ya much
     
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    YYYYYYYEEEEEEESSSSSSS!!! MISS D IS BACK IN DA HOUSE AND FIERCE AS EVAH!!!
    can you feel my excitement? can ya can ya can ya?
    welcome home friend!

    d

    oh yeah.. the piece was fire as hell!
     
  6. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nappily happy...

    sista~d
     
  7. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    open to interpretation...

    i ain't perfect...just visiting... :)
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you know I'm glad to see you....nice way to drop by...
     
  9. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Queen MsDlite,

    now this was hot

    "...my sweet west africa" definitely yes.

    scribe on queen,scribe on

    blak
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sensuous not erotic Kem!

    It is an expression of love without going to the Xtreme...it is tittilating without being pruient, it's warmth without being racuously steamy...TO ME!

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
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