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ghost_writer

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she is perfect... in every way

that is to say that since i would never wanna change her...
she is perfect... in every way

i mean...
she's so fine when she walks by
she makes my heart AND my CD skip
its as if the music was tryin to change the tempo
to flow with the beat... in her hips
i love the gloss on her lips
the pep in her step when she moves
the way she smiles while i make futile attempts to be smoothe

i jus love to listen to her breath (deep breathe)
as i run my fingers through her
i love it when she leaves
and her perfume seems to linger in the air
its... intoxicating...
she... intoxicates me...
some would say that im drunk off her love
but i like to think i'm jus... tipsy
see, she makes me feel so much more than im meant to
and what
i'm tryin to say is that i'm into her
and we can be som much more than we're meant to but...
words...
words just ain't enough
words jus ain't enough to describe how i feel about her
i've tried to live without her
i cant lie...
i'd rather die than not be around her
now that i've found her
i wanna hold her close,
don't wanna let her go when my arms surround her
and i'm certain, cause all my life i've been searchin
and i've finally found her
love... that is
as kisses cloud my vision forgetin the last time i was scarred
the last time love tripped me
and i fell hard enough to break my heart
past experiences keep me guessin
depressin memories leave me in denial
while i'm thinkin this can't be what it is
if it's jus like what it was when it...
wasn't love but...
all that seems to pass as i remember the last time i held her close
thinkin about how her assets make me hate to see her leave but
love to see her go, you know
she's the reason i hate to go to sleep
she's so much better than my dreams
it's like my dreams jus cant compete and...
u just dont know what i mean
it's like knowing how i feel but not knowing if she feels what i know
its like
she completes me, and i just
hope i had her at hello
i, had to say hello,
its like love was knocking at my door
and i was jus lookin through the peep hole
like it was those witnesses for Jehovah
but... shes righ up there next to God
and so i treat her like my queen
u know i thought she was the dope man
cause i feel jus like a fein
and between the times of bliss she brings
and the times i cant seperate reality from dreams
it seem that thats where we ly
and still words...
cant describe...
her...

perfect
 
Welcome to Destee ghost_writer

I like it a lot. It wasn't long at all. It flows well and it stays on piont. Very creative and expressive flow. I know someone like that and she lingers long in my mind.

u just dont know what i mean
it's like knowing how i feel but not knowing if she feels what i know


Because words aren't enough and 24 hours are not long enough. Everytime she leaves time stands between you and her and the arrival of the next day. Keep expressing it to her like you did in this piece.She does know. That is why she returns to let you complete yourself.
 

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