Black Poetry : Perfect

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by cuvriefloesta, Dec 21, 2003.

  1. cuvriefloesta

    cuvriefloesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No one is perfect
    Everyone says it
    so I guess it must be true
    but somebody came really close
    when it was time to manufacture you

    I see perfection in your crooked tooth
    the way it sits there seductively
    and how you manage to roll your tongue slightly over it
    whenever you say you love me :love:

    I know it's strange
    but I even see perfection in you name
    Like how when you introduced yourself to me
    that even seemed like game

    When we fight
    sometimes your even your anger seems so right
    even when I know that you're to blame
    I kind of don't fight with all my might

    Do you perposely brush your teeth before you wash your face?
    cause i'm wondering why everyone doesn't so it
    the other way seems out of place

    who ever made you
    made heaven on Earth for me
    the only imperfection I can see
    is that you do everything perfectly.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so sweet so beautiful so real
    the depth of one soul speaking
    the expression of know dis true love
    very very nicely pose'd
     
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    cuvriefloesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Rich...and thanks for replying to my short story too...but more importantly thanks for your poems...it's sometimes better to :read: than to write
     
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    this was sweet indeed
    i likes this
    nice flow..:angel1:
     
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    indeed most welcome i'm enjoying ya scribes and stories
    i agree i love reading yet i have a burning desire to write
    so i mix them both every night ......keep flowin showing
    love and peace unto u
    Merry Christmas & happy up coming new year !
     
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