Black Poetry : Perfect

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by renee31127, Sep 24, 2003.

  1. renee31127

    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I’m almost perfect
    If only there was thirty pounds less of me
    If only there was five more inches of hair
    If only there was five less inches of height
    If only I could sing better, run faster, be more popular
    Everyone around me is so perfect
    Why can’t I be
    But she wishes she had curves instead of nothing
    And she wishes her hair wasn’t so curly
    And she wishes she wasn’t so short
    Maybe they aren’t all as perfect as they seem
    But I’m almost
    I’m perfect enough for me
     
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    Metree Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo Renee

    Don't sweat it that way
    Somebody always looking
    In a positive way,
    Fat
    Skinny
    Short or
    Tall
    There's somebody Out there
    For us all.

    Keep your head up.

    Mr. Metree
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ya perfect in ya heart
    ya perfect as u smile
    ya perfect as u are
    the height just right
    the weight is str8
    the hair is beautiful
    ya perfect in many eyez
    some u have mesmerized
    so no need to flip a script
    ya more then any may know
    inside ya heart ya love sho
    flow on !
     
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    well i dont have no flow for yall..
    but enjoyed the read...
    flow on...
     
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    this was cool. thanks for sharing.. i admit i've thought some of those things too.. but for different reasons.
     
  6. renee31127

    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Metree and $$RICH$$- Thank you guys that is so sweet. I'm feelin you both :heart:

    mzblk- You always have something nice to say and I really appreciate that :wave:

    Nosrevi- It's good to know I'm not the only one :)
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you are the most perfect renee31127 on this planet gurl ;) bein just YOU :)
     
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    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :) thanks girl:)
     
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    wow, I really like this...
    it really leaves one in reflection of
    what we truly see as perfection
    and in a way, I'm inclined to believed that
    it is those differences that make each of us
    perfect in at least one persons eyes, could there
    be such a word, if it didn't exist all around us...even within us


    This was not only food for thought but an Excellent Scribe!
    Nice work, Renee31127
     
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