Black Poetry : Perfect Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MyTlita, Dec 13, 2005.

  1. MyTlita

    MyTlita Active Member MEMBER

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    In my time of need you are the first that I seek
    You are like a cool gentle breeze that sets my soul at ease
    You are my divine ray of sunshine when the road ahead becomes dark and blinding
    You are the one who keeps me safe from harm
    When I’m with you I never have to be on guard
    Loving you is such a freeing feeling
    If I had to explain your love in on word it would be “healing”
    You’re my most precious treasure
    You are my favorite song
    I could sing your praises all day long
    You are love
    You are loved
    Representing all that is good and all that is pure
    Your beauty has been untouched or changed by the things of this world
    You are the one thing that is perfect, when everything else in life goes wrong
    You are my very own miracle
    You are my destiny now complete
    It is your wisdom and knowledge I daily seek
    Loving you always gives me something nice to look forward to
    It is because of your love I remain strong
    Your fellowship is what keeps me going on
    You are the most beautiful of all that God has created
    You are my protector and my guiding light
    With you by my side there is no room for fear to abide
    You bring out the best in me
    You always manage to see past my faults and insecurities
    Your presence alone makes me joyful inside
    Thank you for taking your place my side
    Through your love I now know I am free to be me
    I no longer have to hide
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece was like a breath of fresh air. You are quite blessed to have found a love such as this. How beautiful.
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweetly pose'd it brings warmth inside
    tyte
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow
    This was Perfect
    Reallt hit home with this
    Means more than anything
    Its must be Perfect
     
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