Black Poetry : PERFECT JOY OF INNOCENCE

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    The poet sat capside
    watching da child
    soft tender humble smile
    such careless play
    filled in pain , stain abyss
    from heart landing a kiss
    a token of hope to say
    it's ok and with faith
    from the garden of love
    my soul will forever hug
    weep not child
    for my handz mend
    comforting u off dis
    tale spin or trend
    a perfect joy is
    forgiveness wit tenderness
    my spirit feel u
    and my heart knows
    so i pose these 11 roses
    to make the dozen is u
    the 12 final Rose
    innocence u i feel u
    and will be with thee
    now feel complete
    for my true warmth is with u
    ya the perfect joy love
    and Innocence...................
     
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    There isn't much that can be compared to the innocence of a child, carefree and oblivious, perhaps too pure for this world? I suppose there are those who just don't see things quite like others do. Anywho, made me ponder...flow on brotha.
     
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    awesome flowing it was smooth and relaxing i was caught up in this.....
    love when your mental takes hold....wonderful scribe.....Angel
     
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    much thankz watz for the visit and love u show me

    big thankz Angel for the visit and love u share here as a fan .....wow
     
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    still thy child watch and lay in perfection
     
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    Nice poem Rich! If we could only see through the eyes of a child
     
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    Wow man...u write so elegantly. Its almost musical to me lol i call it - Negro Shakespearian- :thinking: lol but im a goofy kid
     
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    thankz wisdom7 for the visit into another child's world

    thankz iwannabe it's cool call it as u see fit and feel i'm humbled
    for thy words of praise , I am that i am .....
     
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    can u reflect on the mist of thy child innocence in da glist of da world
    i vision thy child in da warmth of beauty and cast thy cares .............

    big thankz family for seeing inside the innocence of a child.
     
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