Black Poetry : Perception

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Earthly Allure, Apr 7, 2004.

  1. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Delicious and beautiful,
    glistening and pure,
    calm and deep
    precious like gold
    with the intensity of azure.
    My Babylonian diva,
    Egyptian lover and my lover giver-
    turned reciever.
    I fell,
    therefore I am human.
    When you enter me,
    I breath with a newness never percieved.
    How?
    When?
    What is this that wraps me distinctly?
    Murmurs in my ears,
    and wipes my tears.
    The doors to my heart are free and no more,
    I experience a different type of ardor.
    This appeal I feel
    has me speaking in tongues that steal.
    I have been dipped in the honeyed flavor of
    love.

    Copyright 2004 Anno Domini/ "Dark Wynne Inc."
    ~Earthly Allure
     
  2. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice scribe

    wouldnt expect any thing less from you
    keep the pen on lock
     
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    Wow, and what a love it must be with words that flow so smoothly, keep the flow going.
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome flowing here u scribing sweet
     
  5. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Liberator, Watzin, and Rich; You all are my continuous support and avid readers/critiquers. I love you all and thank you three so much for it. You'll never know how much I love and appreciate you.
     
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    Sweet piece.
    I like that one a lot.
     
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    love the flow wow :angel1:
     
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    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this flow's real smooth
    and the words is eloquent
    i enjoyed the read

    one
    /antar
     
  9. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmm.this one was very nice...i love ur work :kiss:
    :heart:
    -story
     
  10. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all for your generous comments and sheer love. I'm blessed to be surrounded by such beautiful peeps.Thank you all!!
    ~Earthly Allure
     
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