Black Poetry : " People's Choice Award for Best Picture "

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  1. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    " People's Choice Award for Best Picture "




    Maybe if I watch " Love Jones " enough times I'll be ready.

    Maybe me & her taking eachother out
    taking eachother's clothes off
    taking time and 3 months later
    ...taking each other for granted....
    maybe it won't be that way.

    Maybe on day I'll learn to watch my mouth
    instead of watching hers.

    Everybody's " couldawouldashoulda beens " of the past.



    maybe we.






    maybe she.






    Maybe If I watch " Love & Basketball " enough times
    I'll be ready.

    Type writer bungee jumps off of desk , cord breaks,
    Suicidal words said " I love ... " .

    Maybe if i watch " Poetic Justice " one more time
    or maybe " Mississippi Masala " ....

    maybe I'll be ready for chance encounters.



    Maybe I'll water the grass, so when she finally strolls by
    and notices " Forces of Nature " on the bigscreen
    through the open curtains .... maybe she'll stay a while longer.


    Lips say " I love you " w/ no words,
    no audible tones - but make impressions
    that leave impressions felt.

    Hav Plenty indeed.


    Maybe if I watch " Boomerang " again, I'll choose the right one.

    Maybe if i borrow " Under the Cherry Moon " again,
    I 'll learn to have fun w/ her when she comes.

    " Oh, NOW you wanna watch Othello with me huh ? "

    Doing my homework, studying mistakes, screenplays,
    script flipping over paid cast members -

    Maybe i'll be Pre paired
    to breathe air
    and treat fair
    the sweet pair

    of I's ,

    that reflect who I am,
    what I watch ,
    who we are.




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    wrote this in one of my desperate yet somewhat
    optimistic moods on my " love life " .
    ________________________________________

    and Yes, I do feel better now -

    I'm not thinking about it.
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A(muse)ing....

    and of course amazin' too. You are a 'thinker' aren't you?!
    Lil' bro ~ I'm lovin' your work of art moving through many facets ~by shear design!


    1 :heart:
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HYPNOTIZE.....

    ...i lovedid it!

    ('nuff said)

    OneLuv.
    SunShyne~
     
  4. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks as always

    I HAD to put the 3 month rule in ...

    Most folks i know , agree that
    most relationships areGREAT !, WORRY FREE !!! , EMOTIONAL BLISS !!!!!

    ..... for the first three months. and then, the drama.
     
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    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TIZZZ IIIIIIIIGHT !!! GOT A SPECIAL LOVE 4 THIS PEICE ...CAUSE IVE BEEN STUDYING AND PREPARING TO BEGIN A SCREENPLAY PLUS A BRUVA IS A MOVIE FANATIC...THIS IS DA JOINT ...RESPECT DUE !!!

    On A Continuous Journey
    GYPSYMAN:cool:
     
  6. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you kindly Gypsyman,

    screenplay Huh ????



    hmmmmmmmmmmmmm




    ( pinky, are you pondering what i'm pondering ? )
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hyp,

    brother this is written with a "basic instinct" that tells you to flow the way you flow. The ink that flows through the "shaft" of your pen is nice.

    your big bro,blak
     
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