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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    When i wrote u century ago
    in plaintive strains and love

    U told me wit pen pipped ink
    trouted in lethe's stream of arms
    dat i must desist from my vagaries
    i t'was trespassing
    upon consecrated groundz

    Oblivion oils filled my eyez
    yet u offer me instead your friendship
    as a relic where i de'vor you deeply

    Among all my refined and elegant
    sensibility of love befounded in me
    I struggled hard to bring myself in terms
    to tis meagre abnegation as my effort
    compromise to be propitious

    I now kiss da rods cherished da relic
    enveloped myself in austerity
    i now inscribe u unto me as my labor
    ur become a massive term & mortification
    forth thy privilage of lovin warmth vowed

    I so mortify u as votary wit a little
    congenial castigation at heart .
     
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    The line between friendship and love isn't always clear, sometimes there's no line at all. Many have been down this road.
     
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    so true, yet many are lost by what is and between dat silver line.
     
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    penitent returns
     
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    I have to be honest
    The only words I knew were I and thy...or was it tis????

    I got it it's funny I dont know if it's just me and my weird understanding of things, but although i couldn't understand 1 word I still was hooked in and knew what you were speaking of
    It's crazy when matters of the heart affect life isn't it??????
     
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    I just would like to get some understanding on my research....
    would you be so kind???
    By relic
    are you a relic of her desires
    as in her memory, or
    what you must leave behind because you are forbidden

    I'm just trying to see where you are...lol
    there are many depths to one form
    and I try explore it all...
    Please don't be offended by my request?
     
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    Thank u and yes i am a mere relic of the many desires of da past memory
    in which one leaves behind ........never offended ........
     
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    THANKX......VERY REAL
     
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    most welcome anytime........Platinumillity1
     
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    still trying to make do with the maze before me ........as PENITENT returns
     
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