Black Poetry : penis envy

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  1. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Freud said it
    and half the world’s men believe it
    that you (sistas)
    envy us (brothers)
    and it was all
    about the penis

    this penis
    thinking on it’s own
    oft destroying homes
    infused with testosterone
    running like a mad man
    even destroying his own

    this penis
    small and white
    brings governments to fight
    ‘cause “i am the big boy
    on this block
    so bow down
    idealist
    politicalist
    culturalist
    to my penal philosophy...
    or get screwed.”

    this penis
    big, black penis
    brings domination to black homes
    beating wives into submission
    and children, love is missing
    ‘cause “i’m the man of this house
    and i’ll swing a big stick to prove it.”
    black eyes blue
    and rib’s near broke
    life seeps away
    with black hands
    on black throats.

    that penis
    engage in power struggles
    head to head
    in corporate boardrooms
    resulting in modern day
    Watergates, Enron, and MicroSoft gloom
    and poor men
    minimum wage-hued
    are left in unemployment lines
    as swinging sticks
    smoke cigars
    in poker played
    back rooms.

    that penis
    truly the heart’s ****-block
    keeping you lover for loving- emotionally
    ‘cause physicality has the heart
    she wants feel love
    he hits and quits – lust
    she’s left to feel empty
    he’s satisfied with heartless thrusts

    full of perversion
    and stolen lives lived
    wives beaten into submission
    innocent, anal ripped deals
    is this penis
    testosterone filled
    really ‘cause for envy?
    naw! - castration fits the bill.
    cut the penis - kill the pride
    cut the penis - and ego subsides
    cut the penis - and war might just end
    cut the penis – lust for love he’ll give.
     
  2. Alkebulan

    Alkebulan Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    strong & bold. thanks. i m down wit this sans the last 5 lines.

    outch!
     
  3. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (Opps - sorry -guess i used a bad word)
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks doc parker!!! it's definatley twisted.
     
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    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really liked this ....the last line puts the question mark behind every other statement....

    K
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank much k.
     
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