Black Poetry : Penetrating Love...A Cindy & GQ Joint

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  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As the instance of penetration draws near,
    I pause to speak in a soft yet primal
    tone...

    Baby let me bring about a smooth meeting of
    our sensuous mentals...repeating this penetration
    loudly enough to bang the aural waves of your
    coveted feminine dwelling

    Hear my cries of passion for the loveliness
    you exude as I sip upon your verbal lips...
    tasting your honey sweet

    Do you dare share your subtle surrender
    with I, the gentleman of quality? He who
    touches your ecstasy so closely guarded?

    You are purely drenching to my senses in
    the moon's light; causing haste in my canter
    to feel you tiptoe back and forth throughout
    my private manly essence

    Lust, love, affection, connection
    I am bound to succumb to desires that
    ignite further this burning heat I feel
    in you

    Sitting in amazement, I ask you to
    come within me, unto me, beside me

    Come as you are; naked to the world
    as the day of your awaited arrival
    to fall in love with me…

    :heart:

    In this cyber essence
    I tiptoe back and forth
    Touching your mental
    in the spanning miles
    from shore to shore

    Our bodies turning liquid
    from the glow and heat of golden auras revolving
    Touching more than body and soul
    Penetrating sacred places only you know
    Penetration evolving into one

    I long for your passionate sizzle to be nearer
    For the sensation of your arms wrapped around my waist
    Pulling me so close to your heat
    that there is not even
    breath between us

    The scent of you
    permeates my senses with sweet sandalwood incense
    The fire in your lips licking the pathway to stories
    yet to unfold within dreams
    of our existence

    I long for the embodiment of your words
    to form fingertips to skim my searing flesh
    Searching for heated silken treasures
    which await only you to possess
    when you plunge into my core

    Closing my eyes I feel you inside me
    as you pierce my psyche with a soft utterance
    I rise to you
    He that makes my body sing
    in a voice smooth as jazz progressions

    I make love to your words
    Exploring your verbs
    until they explode into a vibrancy
    of brilliant lighting in this cyber essence
    This dream
    now tangible

    Loving you...

    ©2K3
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Heatwaves clashing dis was off da poetic hook
    y'all took it to a new level
    a Cindy & GQ love feast what a treat

    really like dis here wow!!!!!!
     
  3. cocobutterskyn

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    A beautiful array of words.
    You two have created an
    absolute MASTERPIECE!


    Feelin' it souldeep!
    Coco
    :heart:
     
  4. Euphoria

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    Wow guys.
    Your words roll perfectly off the tongue.
    A beautiful, yet sexy piece.
    Congrats you two, a great collab.

    *Emma*
     
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    HEY GQ!!! I thought you was supposed to be fighting a war bruh....Ain't no time for no R & R like this:grin:
     
  6. Reason

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    You Two!!!

    This was heated and very well done!!!

    Keep it hot!
    Reas
     
  7. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm Found Cindy...

    Thanks all for the read!

    Enjoyed making
    sweet and penetrating poetical love
    with the Cali Queen called Cindy!!!

    :peace:/:heart:
    GQ
     
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    Very sensual yet steamy peace of love shared between to great poets.

    Aminata (Afri)
    :heart:


    GQ you've been in my thoughts and prayers.
     
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    Excelent job putting into words what so many have felt time and time again! Keep it up! God bless and one love.
     
  10. dnommo

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    okay....okay...you two took me there...this is great and i luv it...
     
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