Black Poetry : Penetrated

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The love so penetrates me
    it has saturated my being
    no matter what obstacles come into
    play, love is all knowing, all seeing
    It has this third eye that sees right
    past the veil that can cloud my sight
    causing the sun's rays to shine brighter during
    the day, and the stars to luster more at night
    Your flow of essence has permeated me to the
    point of no return, appearing in my dreams
    bringing to life a face I've yet to see, and enwrapped
    in my daily thought processes, or so it seems
    If I could be allowed one touch of your hand
    I would be awestruck, as just the thought of you
    brings cool chills billowing around me, surrounding me
    with your love, astounding me with what your spirit can do
    This penetration of love oozes
    a potion, an elixir within me
    taking me any which way it chooses
    It's beyond words
    It's beyond me
    I am so saturated by it
    all I can do is just be
    Penetrated
     
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    that was beautiful watz....
    i liked this line the best...

    a potion, an elixir within me

    one love
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very sweetly pose'd sista
     
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    What a Grand feeling that must be, to not only feel good in waking hours...but sleeping ones as well. Penetration, as we know can and is a wonderful feeling when relaxed and inhale the fullness of it all,
    and with the 3rd eYe open...nothing is un-seeable.
    awesome piece indeed, the flow was mellow.
     
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    Your words convey every nuance of penetration, WOW.
     
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    Nice piece,
    You know IM more than a fan of your work!!
    Keep them coming
     
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    Very intense way to describe receiving & accepting love...penetrated.

    I like that.

    Really nice.
     
  8. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad you liked the piece and especially that line Khasm, your support is appreciated brotha, thank you.
    Thank you brotha Rich for saying so, appreciated.
    Your kind words are always so nice to read queent, thank you sis.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Kudos from you is always appreciated 1poet, thank so much.
    Thank you so much for saying you're a fan TheOne, you humble me.
    Positivemindset, always good to "see" you round here. Thank you so much brotha.
     
  10. Poetrymama

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    Such a beautiful write,Watz. :kickball: