Black Poetry : Penetrate Her Deep

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  1. A007

    A007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Upright we stand in the mist of infatuation
    Uptight it seems about simple converstaion
    about our comtemplation of this intimate act
    we are ready to act like this love is going to last
    so I swim by your lips with a tease of heat
    from my lips to yours, the very definition of sweet
    the sensitivity of your breath grazing my face
    the aroma of your essence that I long to taste

    I digress for a moment to make sure I have touched
    you in every way, shape and form, this is not just lust
    this is admiration for the person you continue to be
    this is anticipation that only enlightened souls can see
    I wish to carress you from within with spiritual affection
    dance with your spirit, embrace your perfect imperfections
    create a masterful work of art with the pictures of your mind
    capture your imagination with explainations of our love in time

    i know you've built a nice fortress around your heart
    I feel you wanting your body to be the place to start
    You want to let me get in without letting me in
    you want to be lover and glide past being my friend
    I can see the fear of something real in your soul's windows
    I can hear the inaudible lies so I know that you are not a bimbo

    So before we go any further on this journey of pleasure
    let me over the walls of distrust to show you the treasure
    the happiness, peace and unselfishness that's willing to serve
    the love, honesty, and respect that all queens deserve
    yes, before I slide inside to explore the surface like others do
    let's just talk for a while, so i can know what's REALLY inside of you.​
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i for one like how these words penetrate my thoughts. titilating write this was. stimulate on poet!:hearts2:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this piece drips steamy and real to feel what's inside ....keep talking !
     
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    Old theme, but seriously well written. Wonderfuly articulated! So nice.

    Thank you for sharing this.

    One.

    ~Ikoro
     
  5. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome back A007:
    Its so nice to see your pen in the house again:)
    This piece is lovely to the last drop.

    Much Luv
     
  6. A007

    A007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks everyone I really appreciate it.

    It's good to be back 4ever. Thank you
     
  7. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I likes...
    ....A lot.
    :toast: :toast: :toast:
     
  8. choclatangel

    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A007, You been in my :boring: dreams:boring: again? :) Lovely write keep doing your thing to the fullest!:darts:
     
  9. sweettee29

    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SEXY, AND OOOOOOOOOOOOOWEEEEEEEEEE I LOVE WHERE MY IMAGINATIONS HAVE GONE BECAUSE OF WHAT YOU HAVE WRITTEN

    LOVELY

    SWEETTEE, LOVE
     
  10. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Getting to know the person inside first, yes that's the way it should be. The sensual quality of this piece was so warmly executed. Welcome back poet.
     
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