Khasm13 : pending thoughts

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    chillin on roof of a skyscraper
    looking down at the thieves and murders worried about paper
    i sense some haters riding up the elevators
    while the street lamps shine light like phazers
    just like that…i’m up in a cloud of smoke like portland trailblazers
    my mind is still consumed with thoughts of the street hazers
    cause in these dayz and times…cats aint pulling out switchblade razors
    they pull out gats that do more then daze ya
    it’s crazed cause...kids bust heaters before they bust suds
    who’s at the top of the ghetto chain of life?…(((thugs)))
    swarming like ants on dead bugs…and crackheads for loose change under rugs
    our babies need two parents and lots of hugs
    but there is too much tough love..too many homeless cats needing grub
    i look down from above…and see a dead dove…descending
    an unhappy ending past mending
    the dove is bout to go splat on the street…truth doesn’t cheat…peace is so unique
    often times looked upon as weak…the violence on this earth has not yet reached it’s peak
    and meager peeps often times…refuse to speak
    ill tainted visions creep and leak…and drip right up on your cheek…through electronic waves
    multiple plots of recent graves out number people thas saved
    last week i peeped a girl that overdosed at a rave
    the ecstasy heated her brain like a microwave before she laid
    my momma told me not to worry bout the wicked…because the wicked fades
    like dead grass…but in the meantime...the life of the innocent fades fast
    helplessness hems up people in mass so they flip it to sass
    talking all that jazz…why is it that everyday i hear a gat blast
    and hear an ambulance run past
    right now…i really don’t see the first being last
    cause the first seems to be exempt from the hearse
    i try to pray instead of curse
    so i pray…but the curse is still submersed
    do people really see what’s happening?
    or are we still just trying to lift every voice and sing
    then spend the rent money on some bling bling
    captured in an evil materialistic ring
    descendants of kings now hype and don’t even feel the needles sting
    while being crushed under pressure like a ping…pong...ball
    can we get a plan…cause i tire of seeing us fall
    and i hope this is true for some of ya’ll
    and i’m not just flapping my jaws…
    cause…life is love and love’s worth giving
    so take a look around…
    what type of message to the youth are we sending?







    the answer is still pending….:jam:
     
  2. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Another AONE PIECE KHASM
    Always feeling your flow
     
  3. freedom Song

    freedom Song Member MEMBER

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    Your comteplation Is genius the cause worth fighting for. Congradulations for overcoming the montomy of this decorous age!
     
  4. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My brother word warrior...I too wish to see
    the "Masterplan"...that will not only set our
    minds and souls...free...but set our people
    free from "Social Bondage"....and
    ...what about our children, smh

    ...and yes, the answer is pending, mos def....

    oh yeah...let me get this in before I go...

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  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man str8 tyte drop this piece was awesome bruh
     
  6. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    they need to read you, the youth that is,
    and the "names" who make the impressions
    they need to hear you
    contemplate...may they will change
    the way...can't be to late
    ...they need to learn from you
    find your spirit
    ride your wave
    powerful, strong and true
    they need you

    pending...answer pending?
    i be praying...they can feel
    you..
     
  7. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Khasm,
    The message that some of us (adults) are sending...is gonna boomarang back and slap us in the face...for real, if we don't get it together...like yesterday. Yes, the answer is forever pending.
    this is a very tight piece and well worth the time to read and inhale.
     
  8. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm feelin this peace mos def. Very nice poet! breathe...
     
  9. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whew...you have a way of poetically slamming the truth. If this is all children see, what do we expect them to emulate? Tight drop as usual.
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    khas....this was awesome off the scale i can vision u history books to come
    you bring it like dat....love ur poetic suit
     
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