Black Poetry : Pen of da Fountain

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Under submission
    from these tention
    my pen venture in
    flow like ink ebbing
    softly painting you
    all the essence
    and perfection of
    precious gems & pearls

    From da depth of fountain
    black and blue scribe my
    heart and soul uncovering
    it beauty i dwell in you
    words cling as prize
    as the spirit recognize
    like orbs of love i pose

    color is brilliant and alive
    i see in your face as i trace
    da radiance autumn glow
    embracing my soul i hold dear
    your enhancing love
    i now pen da fountain of warmth
    cascading from the depth of our
    existance in tyme we space afar
    yet closer in heart i vision ya
    swaying motion as it's harbored
    overwhelmingly affectional maze
    become my resurrection visibly
    i so loveth and instill in you as
    it's written off da fountain of
    black & blue ink i so stain canvas
    slowly echo da excitement of you.
     
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    anotha_LEVEL Active Member MEMBER

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    real smoothe brotha


    this is a hot piece.

    I'm feeingl it
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    big thankz for the visit and love here
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The pen of your fountain
    flows with blackberry ink
    offering a sweet love potion
    to savor and drink

    This portrait you painted was lovely and endearing.
     
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    thank u as it motion down stream like a waterfall
    big up watz for da love sista Queen
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love this flow
    it took me in
    and covered me
    I love the way you
    dropped this

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Thankz u Angel happy it was able to blanket u within
     
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    I love how the pen and the ink can become tools of love, so creative!
     
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    one they mend to pad between lines they become
    beauty , love and alive thank you for the warm visit
    to the fountain wisdom7 soon we have to flow together on one.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    what am i going to do with you man
    you have been mac-ing hard
    maybe i've been away too long

    another hot one by $$$RICH$$$


    DSS
     
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