Quiet Poetry Lounge : Pen A Peace

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Rashad, Dec 16, 2008.

  1. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling the vibe of a lyrical high
    daydreaming
    contemplating next moves
    dealing with life's insecurities
    achieving status
    building with the family
    as i feel my way
    understanding that the life i lead is vital
    artfully expressing emotions in solomn
    Keeping a hopefull speck in the eye
    of sparkling hope for all to see
    A new day begins
    at each passing moment
    filled with dreams
    Broken promises do happen
    its a part of life
    time moves on
    Its a little easier surrounded with love
    encouraging positivity at everyturn
    with hard lessons learned
    i'm grateful so i'll show apprection
    through my essense expressed
    with time and space thats left
    to leave a piece of me
    Eternally speaking
    in a universal language
    that all can understand and feel
    Its not about where you at
    it's where you going
    listening to advice of my ancestors
    and those who are my elders
    i stand still and await
    the time to stand tall
    over the vivid images of
    lifes ups and downs
    its good when able to take
    the bitter with the sweet
    Seeing all things through
    wisdoms eye
    able to sit here and pen a
    peace in the quiet poetry lounge...
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Able to view life with wisdom, knowing that all will come together for the good, I get the feeling that all in all you are satisfied with your life all in all, and what a good place to be. Much enjoyed this piece.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very good read seeing through the knowledge of will for the common good in all
    flow on poet ! speak
     
  4. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yes

    vision is a beautiful thing

    a foundation is a beautiful thing

    your growth is a beautiful thing

    peace
    poet
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well posed piece Rashad

    " Its not about where you at
    it's where you going "
     
  6. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hodee, Preciate ya reading a brotha means much...

    Watinaname, I feel like I'm in a good place most days I feel better after reading good poetry and I like your art as well, thanks!

    Rich, Thanks for reading brotha, just trying to catch the flow my man ya know!

    So'ja, No doubt! Thanks!
     
  7. epiphany

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    Pen A Peace

    Well chosen title Rashad...

    because IT IS peace I feel reading your wordz of poetry.

    well done, Poet!

    epiphany:heart:
     
  8. 4EVERLUV

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    Rashad:
    So much can be said for Peace.
    Magnificient Write!

    Much Luv
     
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