Black Poetry : Peeping Tom

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  1. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Something happened this weekend
    I have to tell you, but you know
    you saw the jacket on the chair
    and the smoke on the table through
    a crack in my curtains
    peeping tom

    Something did happen this weekend
    instead of waiting on you to decide
    whether or not to come over
    i made my own Friday night.

    I got dressed in my tight red pants
    and my black leather halter
    and put on those come **** me boots
    you picked me up in and unzipped for hours
    and then I went to where I knew
    we would run into eachother
    pathetic heart

    Only, we looked intently across
    the room at eachother while
    you flirted and I flirted (just not with eachother)
    Finally, I got tired of flirting and wanted some action.
    So, you know Tweet, right?
    He and I went outside and smoked some
    and, you know those Gin and tonics were real
    not blaming liquor for my inhibition but they helped
    I left there like I came, alone
    only drunk

    So, I pull up in front of the next spot
    Donald tells me you're not in there
    and Tweet is right outside, waiting on me, i know
    So I figure you took that stuck up b^tch home
    with her high yellow *** and pedigree looks
    and we smoked some more and I met his boy
    And, after playing with him for months
    I figure what the hell when he asks
    me if I want to leave
    You knew this though
    peeping Tom
    you saw his jacket
    through the crack in my curtains.

    So, it's 2:24 am and we are sexing and he's alright
    but, all I can think of is you, how
    you eat better
    how, you sex better
    But, how he is better at holding me then you
    and how I know I am going to get caught
    and, maybe this is how you feel and why you creep,
    it made me excited, to know you were going to be mad
    Maybe I just wanted some, any type of emotion out of you
    Pathetic heart

    So, when you started to try to open the door at 4:04
    that I made sure I deadbolted
    all I could do is breath deep and lie
    to Tweet . . . I don't care about him
    and he doesn't care about me
    it was sex, safe sex, and it was intense
    because the whole time we were finishing
    you were calling my name
    outside every window
    you were banging on my door
    rapping on the panes
    shaking the knob
    and for the first time on a Friday night
    you were left standing in the rain.

    At 4:37 am I took Tweet home
    I passed out on my couch
    and at 8:49 am the phone rang
    wondering questions of where i was
    didn't I hear the noise
    who was I with
    when I blew those questions off with
    what do you care
    where were you?
    Outside your door, didn't you hear the noise
    No, I passed out, alone on the couch.

    12:33 pm you came over again
    this time calling first
    insinuating I had company
    which i didn't
    it blew over, he must know
    could it have changed things
    we rarely spend time together during the day
    he wanted to hold my hand
    and touch me and not in a sexual way
    we went on a hike, jogged for a time
    we talked to eachother but not about last night
    and he knew, maybe he'll understand know
    that I will not sit around on a Friday night and wait.
     
  2. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    much props!... i loved this...you go! lol
     
  3. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man, it was a GREAT weekend
     
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    Whoa, girl! My head is bout to explode!! Adorin the concept on this one....the evolution of Randee continues. Props to ya, my friend, big ol props.
     
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    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah, love it when the tables are turned, don't you. Bet he calls first from now on. :)
     
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    whew..........what a visual journey,

    What a weekend, I’m tired just from reading…all I can say is…

    You never miss you water until your well runs dry...
    and then you see the light...
     
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    what a vision...mad props...
     
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    turnabout is fairplay...
    tyte scribe
    peace
    khasm
     
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    So, it's 2:24 am and we are sexing and he's alright
    but, all I can think of is you, how
    you eat better
    how, you sex better
    But, how he is better at holding me then you
    and how I know I am going to get caught
    and, maybe this is how you feel and why you creep,
    it made me excited, to know you were going to be mad
    Maybe I just wanted some, any type of emotion out of you
    Pathetic heart

    say whaaaaaaaaaaat?! I like this... tyte lol
     
  10. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    angelicsage - thanks for the words, man, still smiling. hopefully i'll need as part 2!

    mzblackangel - appreicate your reading

    Khasm - turnabout IS fairplay, as long as you play safe! Deadbolt that door and turn out the lights

    poeticallyspeakin - hey girl, thanks for the quote, i liked the stanza after that better.
     
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