Black Poetry : Peepin Your Style

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by CarrieMonet, Dec 30, 2003.

  1. CarrieMonet

    CarrieMonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Did you notice me peepin your style,

    looking at your sexy self when all along

    you were trying not to notice me.

    I caught your glance,

    that sexy stare,

    those pearly whites,

    I took all of you in with one big sip...

    and you tasted like chocolate supreme.

    Nothing sexier than a man`s chest, you feel me?

    I love to feel it pressed up against mine, nipples to nipples.

    hmmmm...

    just the thought of it all.

    The sun hit your naked chest

    and I nearly creamed in my panties,

    can the ladies relate?

    When you spoke to me,

    your words penetrated my heart

    and started a rumble waaaay down deep in my body,

    in my core,

    made me moist,

    made me hunger for you.

    And that swagger,

    I`m feeling that too.

    That bowlegged walk,

    fit for a horse,

    but better suited for me,

    can I ride you?

    Do you want to feel me too?

    Can you stop and take a long look

    and tell me if you like what you see?

    Can we stop playing hide and seek?

    Can you kiss my lips?

    Both sets?

    Sexual Chocolate...that is you.

    And oh how I want to taste you.

    *licking my lips*
     
  2. LeRoy

    LeRoy Active Member MEMBER

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    im 17 and thats some freaky stuff but
    thats some real talk
    keep flowin
    KEEP WRITING AND I'LL KEEP READING
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a nice drop indeed...
    hot be the word for it...
    i likes...Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    erotica heat wave flowin
    whoaaaaaaaa!!!!
    sexual chocolate
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was indeed a hot one....whew...
     
  6. CarrieMonet

    CarrieMonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK YOU!!
     
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    most welcome continue to flow
    as we grow in unity of love
     
  8. CarrieMonet

    CarrieMonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    another bump for a someone... :wink:
     
  9. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :nono: Somebodies freaky.

    Feeling this poem definately. Please keep them coming girl.
    You got a way with words. I'm sure all would agree. :love:
     
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    :uzi: my sista this here was hot...
    it had some thangs jumpin' round in my loins...

    you got skillz...keep 'em flowin' :smokin:
    this joint had the hotness... :flamet: :flamet: :flamet:
     
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