Black Poetry : Peacemaker

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Chastity, Jan 12, 2004.

  1. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey guys :wave: Ever had feelings for someone and they were once your best friend but then you got kinda replaced....this was talkin about me tryin to deal with this same situation but it kinda has a lil twist...hope u understand and enjoy




    Silence…
    As the level of love drops,
    To an all time low,
    And the bond crops,
    And you both knew,
    What you needed to do,
    In order to put pieces back together.
    And I observe this, confused,
    ‘Where is the love?’ I mused.
    And the story evolves…
    I once admired your boy/girl friendly relations,
    Especially the fact that you gave little indications
    That it would develop into something more…
    Or so I had hoped.
    Yea I will admit it,
    I had a thing for him,
    And the most obvious thing for me to do,
    Was to rejoice over your flame becoming dim.
    But I couldn’t do it. It just wasn’t me,
    I realize that it was the coaxing from the adversary.
    Even though your absence helped him to see my presence,
    I saw that neither of you were happy.
    I discreetly became concerned.
    My interest in making two one again,
    Allowed me to gain time with him,
    That I yearned for, that I couldn’t get by myself.
    And with my help, you are reminded of the first time y’all met.
    Eventually two halves of the heart connect.
    I stand back and smile, the reunion having a slight affect.
    I hide it so well so that none of you detect.
    And I say to you ‘Yea I’m glad…. really’.
    But in my heart, I’m fighting with the conclusion,
    That me and him was just an illusion,
    And we were not meant to be.







     
  2. Qubanita

    Qubanita New Member MEMBER

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    This is good writing, mamita. Keep letting your emotions flow.


     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt piece i know what u mean
    keep flowing expressing
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Chastity...

    this piece is very nice. Good decision...don't hate.

    Nice light flow. Keep sharing.

    :toast:
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a nice flow
    likes it
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This flow had a nice ease to it...no, we never know the hand that life will deal us.
     

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