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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    We come to a close
    on the bed lay a rose
    inside the tea kittle
    lay a box a token from
    my humble heart
    at the step i left my love
    for u to carry and hug
    peacefully
    as i leave on this journey
    my soul in rapture
    this gentle hope captured
    i'll always hold close to me
    that i'll return to u
    peacefully

    Nu ~ wave creation
    Dyamond Luv 2005
    (C) $R
     
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    nice vibe..feeling this flow :welldone:
     
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    it was short but it was created to be Thankz sis for the love & visit
    Angel
     
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    Quite a feeling of ease captured within those words. Such a smooth sweet flow.
     
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    Your welcome as always i dig the vibe you bring
     
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    thankz watz for the hit and love sis.

    u know it angel thankz again sis.
     
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    OO, that's pretty, baby.
     
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    Well...

    This piece is short and sweet. But it is not simple, it says so much. Thank You.
     
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    If in "Peace" you leave, then by all means, in "Peace" do return.
    I like this (peace) piece, thanks
     
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    thank u so much gempis for the visit happy u like

    Thankz a million tashatoya for the visit and love on this short one
    yes it's not simple but can be felt thank u

    thankz queentswana happy u felt it and enjoyed the meaning of it

    luv u all
    peace within................
     
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