Quiet Poetry Lounge : Peace.......

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Pharaoh Jahil, Nov 28, 2003.

  1. Pharaoh Jahil

    Pharaoh Jahil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Learning to be at peace with everyone around
    I approach life threw a peaceful state of mind
    For, I have come to spread Peace and Love
    Appreciating mother nature, as I sit in the forest
    and meditate, the sun shines on my brown skin
    feeling the gentle touch of a leaf with my back up against
    a tree being at peace with my MOTHER...
    Burning incense and candles to send off a peaceful vibe
    Making the atmosphere around me a place of love
    Welcome to the comfort zone.....
    Asking Allah, how can man learn to live in harmony?
    A soothing spiritual voice shakes my soul as I hear the
    words "threw PEACE"......
    For now I know that peace is how we become one with
    thy father......
    Trying to achieve black unity with peace and love
    No more hate or anger, it's time to fight fire with water
    No more harm done unto mankind
    No more harm done unto mother nature
    It's time to learn to love and be at peace with thyself.
    As man sits and waits for his day of heaven
    I now know that there is no heaven above or hell below
    Heaven is in our hearts and we will only find it threw peace
    For if we spread peace threw the universe
    Heaven will manifest itself on Earth
    And we'll all have everlasting comfort, love and peace.
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

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    this was so wonderful..
    posed very well..please share more of your talent...
    much love....:angel1:
     
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    feeling the Peace come alive
    as i veiw them from your eyes
    i feel the comfort in your flow
    as i read it line of your poem
    it is indeed a blessful feeling
    and it induce a inward healing
    as i become apart of your flow
    i to reach a peaceful zone
    thank you
    wonderful
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done poet
    love the flava here
     
  5. PositiveMindset

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    This is the epitome of what I call a "peace piece".

    U are on top of it all at such an early age in life, I wish my mind was open like this when I was your age.

    Keep your mind right-eous, brother, and everything will be yours that U want.

    Including peace.

    Peace.
     
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    This is very nice. Relaxing and calm.
     
  7. Pharaoh Jahil

    Pharaoh Jahil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Peace.



    Thank you my sistahs and brothahs, Im glad yall enjoyed this.
     
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