Black Poetry : peace out

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  1. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The darkness of your spirit has clouded the brightness of my tomorrow
    For the last time
    although
    The sun has not yet dawned my day
    it’s crescent smile I sense
    Time and time again in different ways you told me that you were but a trick for hire
    But the love, unqualified we shared for a time would not let me believe the words that were emanating from your being
    The tears that streamed down your cheeks when we parted ways, had touched my heart.
    But optimism is no loner my friend and goodbye must be the order of the day

    Now to say that I don’t miss you would be untrue
    But when time tries to erase the blues about you
    A recollection of your selfish child like spirit accompanied by your venomous words of ridicule remind me of why I lost your number.
    Maybe one day you will grow up and stop holding every man who cares for you responsible for the bull**** your mama told you that your daddy didn’t do
    Yo momma has chosen to reserve a special space in her heart to foster the festering hate she has for your daddy, and if the lonely life she leads is what you want for yourself then
    Here are two thumbs up to tradition
    keep the hate alive
    but you’ll have to do it without me
    peace out V
     
  2. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am loving this.....
     
  3. gempis

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    Whoa! This is very powerful, shaz. I love this.
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

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    I'M LOVIN THIS TOO...
     
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    likin this alot
     
  6. luvNwords

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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dayum.....nice flow
     
  8. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    like whaaaaa :eek:

    you dropped this :bomb: like you were waging war...

    this was tyte...as ever...it was a coaster of emotion

    and underlying issues that just continued to unfold

    this was like whoa, poet!
     
  9. true love

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    i'm with angelic on this one! this was really like WHOA! it really hit the spot...i'm tellin' you! much love for this one
     
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    wow
    powerful read
    very nice
    Wonderful
    Peace
     
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