Black Poetry : PEACE "N" POVERTY

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  1. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    {Just a few thoughts i decided 2 write down!}



    This isnt a poem or a thought of action just a remininse a lil story to unfold.
    Lifes a mistory.
    So many thingz to decide..how do u kno if what u do iz right or wrong?
    Tha voice in my head left me along time ago.
    Tha smoke is clearing, my emotionz r comin back to me.
    Family iz missing, friendz r far away.
    Havent they realized life cant go on like this?
    Drugz n voilance isnt the answer anymore.
    I've grown up these last couple of dayz.
    Well perhapz itz been alonger than that....they neva noticed anywayz.
    i was so blind to neva see that God was helping me.
    I'm thanking the heaven'z aboth 4 makin me..me.
    Don't act so sly I c ur criez.
    Take my hand I'll help u make ur way to a new land.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautiful thoughts for today to live on
    well done
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes a revelation can just hit you, just like that, making you see things clearer. I hear ya. Flow on.
     
  4. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for sharing your thoughts....
    keep the flow goin
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blatina, don't cry
    God is standing by...
    He's family in the making
    Heaven, your vacation!

    Thanks, for sharing. :horse:
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for sharing....enjoyed
     
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