Black Poetry : PEACE MAKER

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I COME IN PEACE~

    Experience the tranquility
    ...inner peace and neutrality
    from within...me
    armistice induced serenity
    exfoliated
    through your soul
    as you
    allow
    YOU
    the opportunity
    to know
    who
    I
    be

    Can you appreciate that?

    Consider conciliation
    in an -all to brief-
    quiet of your storm
    sssshhhh...listen~
    ...pleasant isn't it?!
    P-E-A-C-E-FUL
    .....unlike anything you've ever heard....

    I AM just on the other side...
    ~your opposite,
    in plain view, but
    within reach;
    and only a stone's throw away

    one shim-mer-ing flame
    bright, warm, and inviting
    blazes internal
    eternal~
    ......ever so still
    slow b-u-r-n
    or burning
    slow/ly

    Here I AM
    standing ready
    to "heal the breach" of trust
    that your last lover
    disturbed; interrupted-

    love
    that was
    pacified by unharmonious
    tendencies;
    your overestimation of
    someone else's
    lascivious libidos -with others
    is too carefree

    in my observation....
    I see "for sale"
    a purchase made with loose change
    ....like....
    a can of
    watered-down
    disrespect
    with you as the #1 consumer
    ........................so -
    Stop consuming
    ...or switch to a another brand-

    ...why do you compromise?
    you've got to decide...

    and just
    when you do...
    you'll be offered an olive branch -
    but, will you accept it?

    Lay down your arms,
    let MY silence surround you
    make anew ... room in your cortex
    - try experiencing the aforementioned
    ...for you
    ...for me
    ...for us; and
    ...for WE

    you have nothing to fear, so
    relax...
    ..........let go
    .................let it go
    resilliant/exhilaration, inhale the smoke from my peace pipe

    I AM asking will you try something different
    for a change...
    -cause-
    change is good,
    and a change
    may be necessary
    for you to take hold
    of my firm offer
    ...which is
    a piece of peace

    I am a Dove....flying high to reach you- down there
    I am Nirvana~
    ...contemptous appeaser
    here to bring you
    "peace of mind";

    and I AM
    the CALM
    that comes -
    just after the storm
     
  2. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well, I like This Part, I COME IN PEACE...

    GOOD ENOUGH FO ME! I'M REALLY FEELIN YO RYTHMES. COMES FROM THE HEART,THAT'S WHAT I LIKE! VERY SINCERE. YOUR COLLAB WITH WORDS IS PHINOMINAL!
    ALWAYS AND SINCERELY,
    DESERT STORM
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    STORM....STORM...STORM...

    The light "clicked" on this
    morning, and I've been rolling
    all day long -
    like chompin' at da bit --
    with these few scribes o' mine.

    Thank you sissa-gurl
    ever-so-much
    for the replies you bestow
    upon me!
     
  4. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well...

    Well,You've got the MIdas touch! Whateva you do turns to gold. Keep reppin! Enjoy readin ya all da tyme!
    Sincerely,
    Desert Storm
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gracias - Mami Storm!

    Again, gracias!
    You are too kind!
    You're right, putting
    your feelings to paper
    to make them somewhat
    "tangible" is
    difficult - with a capital "D".

    But, I try!
    Thanx for the comps sis!!
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No Prob,
    NO,you are too nice,to come in peace,and share these magneficent rythmes with us. It's your thang gurl...It's all 'bout you! Do yo thang!
    Always and Sincerely,
    Desert Storm
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Stormy Weather~

    It's all GRAVY gurl!
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2,

    For me not to reply to this would be a sin..thus I say...
    "CLASSIC!"

    one love, blak
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    FEELIN' YA
    YA INTO THE SOULS
    A #1 HIT IN DES PIECE..
     
  10. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$

    Glad to know you liked it $$RICH$$.

    Thank you for the comps...
     
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