Black Poetry : Peace I Leave With You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Feb 21, 2005.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Facing the guillotine
    You feel at peace with me
    Crucified on your tree

    Arcane as that may be
    I'm writing poetry
    You hate what you see

    But not to say the least
    We live to fight the beast
    In blood from Calvary

    Just ain't about me ~
    You too can be free
    To Love somebody


    Darryl Abdu Omari :kiss:
    aka 1 poetsought ~ copyright 2005
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    free ya heart to love one the unsong love of peace
     
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    I really like this one... especially "But not to say the least We live to fight the beast In blood from Calvary" It is so true ... great flow
     
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    Through peace a soul can find so many things that are unclear in the midst of chaos. Flow on brotha.
     
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    There's power in those lines, yes indeed.
     
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    Thanks family!
     
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    most welcome brutha your pen speaking in tongue to us
    keep flowing man i'm listening @ ya !
     
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