Black Poetry : paying homage

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by missknowledgerecv'r, Apr 3, 2001.

  1. missknowledgerecv'r

    missknowledgerecv'r Member MEMBER

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    When I walk alone-your prescence is near.
    When I am in silence its your voice I hear.
    When I am scared there is really no fear.

    I have often wondered how that could be, I mean I cant touch or see you , yet you cradle me in your arms, remove all of my self-doubt, you give me peaceful thoughts and show me what life is about.My mind is at ease though--just because I know.


    When the alarms sounds, I know I didnt wake from the clock but from your word,some people say your non exsistent but I know different.

    Thank you holding me, consoling me and blessing me.


    When I walk alone-your prescence is near.
    When I am in silence its your voice I hear.
    When I am scared there is really no fear.
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    such beautiful peace in this flow

    thank you for this

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  3. missknowledgerecv'r

    missknowledgerecv'r Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Destee
     
  4. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Amen sista amen.



    One
     
  5. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    he breathes outer breath through our lives

    and appreciates you a hundred fold more for acknowlegding his presence and loving him.


    stirring piece.


    sean.
     
  6. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Much blessings for ya Miss K!!!

    Well scribed!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I HAVE 2 RAISE MY HEAD UP FALL TO MY KNEES
    AND SAY YESSSS!! MOST BEAUTIFUL PIECE ....
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was absolutely lovely!!!

    Reas
     
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