Black Poetry : Pause.....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Auroraflower, Jan 16, 2006.

  1. Auroraflower

    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (wrote this on new years day..)


    I,m staring at the disstance.......



    I freeze...

    standing still between here and there...
    as if i swollowed a 12.....
    and the clock hits it in my stomic..

    there is a silence in my head....

    what is going on in there....?


    my heart is pumping...
    i am alive...

    what is going on in there...

    is it the silence before the trompet...

    am i in the middle...

    30 ?...

    31 ?....

    where am i ...

    i dont like this....

    it was a good year..
    a busy year...

    i want to move forward..
    i moved forward...
    dont want to go back..
    i,ve learned...

    no neverland for me...

    normaly i love the silence but not this one..
    its not nice company..

    what is this ...it feels that i aint getting no fresh air.....






    o...



    i got it......



















    breath.............
     
  2. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Suspense!!!!!!!! I loved it! Very nice poet:kiss1:
     
  3. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was beautiful
    Lovely flow
    Like your style poet
     
  4. nevar

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    pause this is something flow on poet flow on .:kiss1:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A pause can be a much needed rest, but sometimes it makes us fearful of what's coming next. I enjoyed this flow Auroraflower.
     
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