Black Poetry : Pause

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PropheticNsyght, Jun 8, 2004.

  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmmm like the scent of Tibetan Rain incense on the wind....
    Can I breath?
    Can I just take a minute to let it all sink in?
    Is this how it's supposed to be?
    Every time you something is sent from you,
    I get this warm feeling that leaves me feeling all kinds of breathless and disoriented.
    When you smile it shows on the paper.
    When I read your words I am filled with that familiar warmth that causes my inner to glow.
    You are so....
    A speechless feeling settles over me, and I’m
    left with a pregnant pause.
    You create in me a deep-seated feeling of a thousand smiles and I realize that your beauty and kindness makes
    you the essential friend.
    You are both the duskiness of twilight and the newness of morning.
    My Friend,
    My Completeness,
    My Infinity.


    ~*Copyright
    The year of the Monkey (2004).
    The 93rd year, 4th month, and 21st day(Tuesday the 8th)
    "Selestial Khemet" Publishings
    ~*PropheticNsyght
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte drop this was awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop
    really enjoyed this
    read...thanks for sharing
    peace
    angel
     
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    WOW...I know I seem like a big groupie...
    but man...your words, your gift, your style...
    is just so captivating...
    your work consistently leads me to
    the threshold of "Wonderment"....
    I've so experienced this...but never put it into words
    this was just so masterful and real...

    Poet...you're so stunning :spinstar:
     
  5. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    RICH and Angel You are both too too too wonderful. Much love to the both of you respectively! God bless.
     
  6. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Angelic, if you are a grouping then I'm definitely an obsessed man! You move me in ways that I've never been moved before with the purity and regalness of your writing. Earthy meats Regal that has a nice ring and feel to it. I want to thank you for your beauty and love. You are truly a blessing. Keep putting out delicious pieces. Much love and peace poetess.
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your writing is....wow....I gotta say. I really enjoy reading it. It's the kind that can warm up the insides:)
     
  8. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Once again thank you darling. You are a blessing. thank you a lot.
     
  9. Beautiful_by_me

    Beautiful_by_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop: "I get this warm feeling that leaves me feeling all kinds of breathless and disoriented" :deal:

    Go head on now...to real...to true......

    More ...More... More...

    Tia
     
  10. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aWwwwwwwwwww thanks ma. I appreciate your brand of love. God bless
     
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