Black Poetry : PATIENCE

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  1. Beautiful_by_me

    Beautiful_by_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ©PATIENCE

    As sure as night returns as day…I know that there is more to this than we conceive it to be…
    I know;
    Please here me when I say,
    I would never make your heart, my decision…
    Nor will I make this thing simple…
    I am She,
    The one God designed
    When he had
    “her”
    The Creation in mind….
    With reverence for my maker, it makes being chosen a given…
    I choose to be every mans desire…with one man in mind…
    In time…you’re chosen…
    Picked out of many that are ready but not ripe…
    Ready to be consumed, wanting to be digested, not ripe.
    I’ll wait out the temptation of the pick…
    For the due season is nigh to me…
    Not to be crowded by others I await the taste…
    The sweetness of
    The Essence of…you…
    I will wait; upon the hourglass of time standing still
    Impatience flows like the sands of the oceans floors…
    I’m weakened and leaning upon the ripeness of my own mind.
    I no longer have to wait
    I now know, who you are to me…
    I bore; the whole…and reaped the ripeness thereof…
    Through immense pains of labor-love
    God called Thee “Man”,
    And I call thee… “Patience”.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice flow wow!
    poet of the week pen dripping sweet flow on !
     
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    Beautiful_by_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :thanks: Thank you sweetness...It's good to be back...
     
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    happy to feel ya peen again too
    so let it flow as we honor u ...welcome back
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very beautiful and moving Poet of the Week. I think you may have a new fan :toast: :toast: :toast: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
     
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    very well done
    enjoyed this read......poet of da week
    flow head on....wlcome home...too
    Angel
     
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    They say that patience is a virtue, and I feel it is, I like the way you designed this work of art.
     
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    One Word...

    :spinstar: SENSATIONAL :spinstar:



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    :eek: Now you know why you are poet of the week! Wonderful work here!
     
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    Beautiful_by_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :luvv: Thank you for all of your kind words...It's good to :luvv:be back...your love burns images of you loving kindness into the essence of my peacefull heart...

    :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug:

    :cry: Thank You.....Thank you....Thank you....Thank you :cry:
     
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