Black Haiku : Pastel Purple

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The lavender breeze
    whisked her away into his
    strong awaiting arms

    He held her tightly
    Merging lilac
    Energies
    Two now
    One
     
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    http://larrykimmel.tripod.com/tangerineone.htm

    ** haiku variation: Gembun

    made up of one word or one sentence link
    to be capped off by a haiku of up to four lines.



    our energies painted veins grey


    we exist betwn
    worlds-holdin' otha and
    livin' as one piece
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Quite an informative link, Scrybe, thank you.

    Deep ocean blue mirrors me

    As your ship sets sail
    And I long for your embrace
    Your arms, my haven
     
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    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gembun...


    lighthouse...


    u be the moment
    within my parted lips-i'll
    loose my soul in u.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    blowin rapidly

    every moment we shared in
    our love is embraced

    we like four season
    wrap into one
    our love is
    embrace
    high
     
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    so many shadings
    pastels meld within/ without
    warm purples invite
     
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    Cool colors evoke
    Mellow warm feelings, pastel
    purple, beckons thee


    Great to see ya, Sister Deepy!!! :)
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    very "deep" poet

    lovedided the spirituality of this piece
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey So'ja, glad you lovedided it. Thank you. :)
     
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