Black Poetry : Past Futures.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Khai Tau, Apr 20, 2007.

  1. Khai Tau

    Khai Tau Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This past holds the future we had
    and now we have again, it madness
    not too long ago, it was just stagnant
    Now like a magnet, we stand attracted
    with a certain matter-of-factness
    its happnin and not of its actin
    So Im askin myself am I trappin
    the wealth of desire that dwells
    in me healthily. The best of me
    I give freely with no freebies
    Truely I revere thee
    and hope that you'll always be near me
    hear me? You remind me of my first wife
    never been married but it feels right
    musta been a past life. Feels like
    God has spared me a rib
    and given me what hards to give
    His angel. I'll live for you
    and keep you far from danger.
    You be the ship and I'll be the anchor.
    Be the canvas and I'll be the painta
    Lord I wanna thank ya
    And Love dont you become a stranga
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm loving the pace, word play, and message in this. Wanting that past to be a bridge to a loving future. Welcome to Destee. I'm looking forward to reading more from you.
     
  3. Khai Tau

    Khai Tau Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I appreciate the love. Im most definitley looking foward to posting more here and hope my work is anywhere close to the quality and depth of the work Ive seen here by the Destee Family. Stay major.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    great piece of work as i can relate
    your creation of words and mental play is tyte poet
     
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