Black Poetry : Passion's Valentine

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  1. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Release my passion upon you,
    At the entrance of my desire.
    Venture along my trails as
    I slowly build your fire.
    Show me your gentle then give me your wild.
    Have me your way because our bed is not defiled.


    Sistah J
     
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    Joyce:
    Your "Passion Valentine" is
    is SPLENDID.:)


    Much Luv
     
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    AND...............................
    Delightful warmth together
    Entering our cocoon of love
    Velopping on sweet hush
    Invading my heart i welcome u
    Nightly through my own rush
    Enlighting my love splash
     
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    Ravish & Devine back in the twine lights for valentine
     
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    Short & Sweet and I'm feelin the sensual in this piece....
    very nicely done Joyce...



    epiphany:heart:
     
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    Sister Joyce has this way of using just the right words to express a given feeling, and thios piece says passion all over it.
     
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