Black Poetry : PASSIONS OF MY MIND

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  1. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Come to me open and free

    leave your worries at the door

    no room for them here

    only for you and me

    allow me to ignite passion all over your body

    implant your mind with heated thoughts of extacy

    create unforgettable erotic memories

    my body....your body...

    nakedly entwined

    don't keep me waiting.....

    your arrival

    was so smooth and articulate

    upon site I bit my bottom lip

    because I wanted to kiss

    Yours….

    but of course I didn’t

    i'm already smitten and tenderly bitten

    by your love bug and comfort hugs

    don’t want to get caught up

    find myself asphyxiated and suffocating

    inside of you

    as a result of the things you say and do

    Now….

    later it might not be the same

    or provide the precise flame

    to entice me to feel the same

    way I do Now….

    so instead I continue to keep

    these thoughts of you confined within

    the Passions of My Mind
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You want to be able to express those feelings when the passion runs high, beckoning him to come. So well expressed poetess.
     
  3. A007

    A007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well...

    The mind is a powerful thing. Passionate indeed.
     
  4. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yea sis

    it must be hard confining all that passion

    in the mental

    because the piece has some real passion

    it put me in the moment
     
  5. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watz:
    As always thank you for the love and the read.
    Sometime some things are better left within
    ones mind.


    A007:
    Well...hello there its been a while. So nice
    of you to bless my plece. I VERY much agree... the mind IS
    a powerful thing.


    So'ja, So'ja:
    If I was to let all the passion inside
    my mind out...just the thought frightens me..lol
    Thank you very much for your words of passion.



    Much Luv
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    spark my fire
    untouch my soul
    allow time as we shelter
    in the space of passion
    and kiss everlasting of
    tenderness
    this was so hot and blazzin i'm hot !
     
  7. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$:
    I know you know about the passion....
    thank you sweetie for the visit to passion.



    Much Luv
     
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    hmmmm sis...burn me!:qqb014:
     
  9. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AgAbus:
    lol...you need to stop...lol
    Be care of what you ask for.
    Thanks for the read.


    Much Luv
     
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