Black Poetry : Passion's Kiss.....

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  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :love: Passion....

    Dip and ease into this mental stick
    undressing your mind is a simple trick
    Words sliding into place like a perfect fit
    Your body leaning to the side hanging off the tip

    Passion all twisted like liquorish sticks
    Feel every curve brush against your lips
    Lustful straws
    Make you Drink in sips
    Wind that tongue on this caramel trip

    Feel summers hot sweat drip
    Soaking sheets with the heat when our bodies mix
    creating energy that's tapped with every trix of the trade
    like country flavored marmalade out of old jelly jars
    We make the bed our sky and we are the stars
    we rise and set like the Moon and the Sun
    Creating rain and Rainbows as we move as one.

    head boards Rock like thunder while the Bedsprings shriek like lighting
    candles burn their wicks and our silowet's move in the nights wind
    Your my tasty treat as you enter in
    this desire to devour and consume you skin 2 skin

    finger tips trace the places where I shall enter inside
    Lips caress and kiss as they continue to glide
    Across your hills and valleys and down through the soaken pasture
    Exploring every crevice and curve to obtain what IM after.

    Your dam releases the floods and you fall like Niagara
    As you shake and Quake within your natural disaster
    I snake your Body's fissure until u pup like old faithful
    I take you from Back, Front, Side and on top your soo graceful

    We explode into the dawn within eachothers grasp
    you are the perfect fit to my life what more can I ask?

    Caramelpython 2004
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What a lucky lady is she...that's the kind of :flirt: ...to set you soul on :flame: :flame: ...and that's alright
    this piece is awesome and I felt the movement :spinn:
    enjoyed reading this very much...thanks
     
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    wow :jawdrop:
    We make the bed our sky and we are the stars
    we rise and set like the Moon and the Sun
    Creating rain and Rainbows as we move as one


    feeling ya vibe yes oh yeah
    this was a nice and sticky drop
    enjoyed this read...wow


    :grin: <<<<<thas you

    :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot:
    Passion kisses huh?
     
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    Way to put down, nice scribe
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    bring it red hot wit passion da kiss is laid
    this was awesome tyte brutha flow head
     
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    Spicing things up with a steamy hot seductive drop, the passion shines.
     
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    Whoa, you laid this passion out beautifully, CP!!!
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TY

    Thank You sis I am pleased you and others are feeling it. :spin:

     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwwwww thanks angel

    :smokin: I'm just trying to get back in my poetic skin.. thanks angel :wink:


     
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    :thanks: Alot...... ;)

     
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