Quiet Poetry Lounge : Passionate Drip

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Apr 5, 2005.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As day broke, she awoke
    suddenly, with a start
    Body still dripping from passion,
    she looks over at him. Her heart
    once again begins to race
    as her eyes slowly, lovingly
    trace that peaceful, handsome face.
    Not wanting to wake him, she
    slowly inches out of the bed.
    In the shower, she simply can't
    get out of her head, all of the
    naughty things that they said
    and did just hours before.
    Figuring that he'll probably be
    hungry, she scrambled some eggs,
    fried some bacon, and brewed some tea.
    She took a cup with her and sipped,
    as she sat next to the bed gingerly...
    Suddenly, he awoke with a start
    His heart began to race
    as he gazed into her face.
    He pulls her towards him
    as he sensually sips
    the tea from her lips
    and her body once again drips
    from passion....
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well it sounds like to me...she became the bacon and eggs, with (lip)tea. The kind of breakfast I don't mind waking up too...whew
    that was wonderful to read, what a fulfilling way to start the day
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, that would be a fulfilling way to start the day, I agree queent. Thank you for the supportive words on this.
     
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    Woohoo...nice scribe..got me hot over here..very sensual and nice..passion drips from this flow..
     
  5. watzinaname

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    Glad to know you enjoyed the flow Nisa, thank you much poet.
     
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    Passion pours out of you pen.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well done and expressed here tyte drop sis.
     
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    Whoa! Drew me in and got me goin!!!! :coffee:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you 1poet, for checking out this vibe.
    Rich, thank you for dropping in on this one brotha.
    And there you are gempis, with your own cup, lol. Thank you sis for the support that you give.
     
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