Quiet Poetry Lounge : Passionate captions

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by a-mere-man, Dec 10, 2003.

  1. a-mere-man

    a-mere-man Member MEMBER

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    This poem was written by me and my girlfriend. the text in all cap is what she wrote. the rest is mine.


    u touched my pen can you bless it again to spark words of passion inside of my skin straight to my heart like cupids dart, that sparked this emotion no potion all real. do you feel what i feel are you real, be still and let me observe your words your actions and reaction. no distractions all passion i feel its so ill the thrill the emotions are as deep as the ocean. THIS LOVE POTION IS A NOTION THAT KEEPS GOING AND FLOWING, STEADLY BLOWING, AND SLOWLY BUT SURELY KNOWING THAT SOMETHING MUST COME OF THIS BLISS AND THE ESSENCE OF HAPPINESS.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    a very nice smooth piece of u two love the collab
     
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    very nice piece....:angel1:
     
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    tis a nice thing when minds work together..
    when folks collaborate
    a nice thing...
     
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