Black Poetry : Passion

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Gently touching my lips
    still tingling from yo kiss
    my heart race inside
    like a blissful eruption
    happiness settle ova me
    unbelieving da rush
    as a crush take hold
    da exhilaration felt deep
    amazingly i feel da passion
    my own senses betray me
    in the moment of dangerous abandon

    yet completely apprehending
    knowin deeply as it flow
    the passion of enchanting luv
    ur eyes glaze into mines
    da sparkle of yo smile
    lets me feel da warmeth of yo luv

    the burning feelings mirrored
    in our minds
    we lone for dis day together
    inside my vision i picture u
    again & again

    i still feel yo passion ova me
    da aroma u left behind
    is whirling me back into da moment
    of tyme where i dreameth
    da room i vision is filled wit an
    unbelievable , unexplainable
    my soul reach out to caress ya thoughts
    as my heart race to enterwined
    my mind blanks into u only
    inside my grace
    and my total loyalty
    intensity
    every motion of u makes me yearn
    in a rare rapture captured in my mind
    we found unconditional luv
    :heart: :love: :heart:

    ur ever so near yet far away
    but inside my heart & mind
    i feel u
    i hear u
    i cry 4 u
    i need u
    my dear I know I LOVE U...:heart: :heart: :heart: :)
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OH this is tight, it flowed so evenly... you always pick the right words to say.
    Many blessings
    Desert Storm
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ALL I CAN SAY THIS IS REALLY ILL KEEP THIS FLOW YOU VERY GOOD AT THIS
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    D.Storm.......i 'm crying out loud to reach her true luv
    if she only could hear me ......Thankz sistah

    MADD......man when one express self of luv it flowz out dis way
    u know how it goes coz i pick up a mix or two from u my brutha
    thank u ....
     
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