Quiet Poetry Lounge : Passion

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GwenDee, Jan 7, 2002.

  1. GwenDee

    GwenDee Member MEMBER

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    Passion sometimes rushes with a swiftness that knocks you on
    spiritual knees.
    Pleading for normal.

    Other times a smile or a steam that drifts between old lovers
    quietly coverig old wounds - like a faded quilt.

    Your soul peeked out one sunset between bites of sweet
    potatoe pie and sips of champagne.

    It lingered just long enough to cause my soul to sigh.
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you

    are brilliant!

    thank you

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    just simply

    beautifully written in vibe ......yes indeed sometime
    passion is feaverish !:)
     
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    uppin this piece it's so beautiful
     
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