Black Poetry : Passion

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thatgirl74, Mar 26, 2004.

  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What we have is so unreal.
    We bond chemically
    Physically
    and Spiritually.
    You can smell my
    wants and desires
    on the jagged breath
    I release when I am
    in your presence.
    And when you set
    out to fulfill my needs
    you move mountains
    and light infernos.
    Your touch is like
    the whisper from
    heaven, Your kiss
    the cool drink of life.
    I have never wanted
    or needed some thing
    so greatly. I have never
    craved anything the way
    I crave you.
    You are more decadent than
    a piece of rich chocolate.
    You are more fulfilling than a
    a 7 course meal. You are
    my sustenance and my oxygen
    without you I am nothing.
    You are my love.
     
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    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So much depth
    So much passion
    Dang
    You had to be talking about me right? :cool:

    No seriously,
    I like this flow
    Went down smooth
    Good piece!!!!!

    Peace and love
     
  3. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks so much
    And if you want it to be about you
    So be it.
    You can be my muse....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wooooooooweeeeeeeeeeeee!!!
    da sweet release da depth da love
    as it unchain the body of essence
    in a rapid fire of lovin from da heart
    the soul capture the electromatic
    warmth of gentle grace and unto u
    thy hand reach in the embrace
    as the trace of ya inner depth
    is beckoning da bliss of love
    flow on ......
    i was beside u in dem feelings
    see me !

    tyte scribe in a romantic flava
    tasty
     
  5. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ummm I hear ya.
    Thanks for the words that encourage and inspire.
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i love this...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You went straight to the heart of your feelings, it sounds like a deeply felt love. Well written flow.
     
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