Black Poetry : passing thoughts

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  1. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what does it mean
    when you spend part of your life
    with someone you consider special
    and the other person considers you just sex
    what does it mean
    when you move on from that person
    but hold them in your heart
    and the other person considers you a passing thought
    and
    when you finally see one another again
    the other person never replies
    does it mean
    that they meant more to you
    then you meant to them
    or is that all the other person is capable of giving now
    does it mean
    that you are less than worthy
    unattractive
    not important
    or does it mean that the other person has issues
    and is incapable of seeing things from your side
    maybe the other person is helping you to move on
    not dwell on that part of your life
    letting you heal old wounds
    allowing you to laugh and smile again
    and no longer pop little yellow pills
    and if that's what it means
    i should be saying thank you
    shouldn't i
    thank you because in the long run
    it means that you do care
    or at least
    that's how i chose to see it
    badass ***** that i am
    i can't see it any other way! :lol:
    what does it mean
    but in the end
    what does it matter
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    matter less of whom so not care
    wordless of lost love that was never their
    helm to the fact of moving on
    after seeing makes u strong

    only means u made it pass the less of pleasure
    that one so posed unto u forth new beginnings
    of a true mate to be .....flow on REDLADY !
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I felt you here, redlady.
    I say let the thoughts pass
    as preparation for whatever
    life brings your way.
    Just be the best you you can
    be and don't compare yourself
    with the next person unless they
    are your identical twin. Otherwise
    just enjoy the differences.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    redlady... redlady

    All over the radar screen
    Makin' us wonder, what it means
    Congratulations! Poet of the week-
    Your war of words... serene

    1poetsought ~



    :toast:
     
  5. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it matters because it means that you are not at fault...they just do not appreciate the beauty that is you, so therefore it is their loss...and it matters because from every experience we take something with us, a lesson we learn...

    K
     
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    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mean

    i feel your equation
    been thru a similar situation myself
    do it means me an you can go get some McDonald's?!

    Noo. But we are free to.

    One.
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful poem been in that situation myself plenty of times
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a good drop
    posed well....

    a lesson learned and u move on...
    so it matters if u learned from it
    i likes this drop
     
  9. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seems like love on one part, and just physical on the other, but what matters in the end is your feelings and being able to move on. Feeling this emotively written flow.
     
  10. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was def. a tyte scribe poet. although it hit a lil too close to home right now. i feel u cuz i have those same thoughts constantly runnin thru my brain. much love :)
     
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