Black Poetry : PASSING OF SEASONS AND IF 2 LUV

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar:
    Father cries at dawn
    memory of Mother
    comes at dusk
    and if u sho devotion
    inside day to day
    and bring love to
    work or play
    song of songs sing
    as da love of freedom
    ring & ring !!
    the sounds of forever
    if u can lend assistance
    and not to ever interfere
    and be as loyal & dear
    surely sweet harmony
    comes in cheer
    heard in the memory
    solitude made , promise
    renew'd to withstand da
    happiness of lovin as da
    ending echo's scream
    yet dreams call out from
    da sleep and teary eyez
    weep to the fairy of love
    offering encouragement
    understanding as the vision
    speaks wit openness & honesty
    the uniqueness of souls clash
    into a bliss of love at heart
    and weave the myth of reflection
    as goodness set forth overlooking
    da faults & weakness to bond da
    intent mind wit a strong grip of
    praise wit all ya heart
    and turn the blindly call of senseless
    jealousy or needless pride to unite
    they the true love in unity is born
    from the forfathers & Mother's
    o' how happy life can be when ur
    deeply in love of thy own togetherness
    inside the passing of seasons 2 love .
    :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice
    what a strong vibe
    i got from this...
    ..Angel
     
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    Rich,

    I don't know how to explain it...
    but there are times your scribes
    entertain and touch me...
    and then there are times...
    when they just...
    reach as deeply as poetically possible...
    into the depths of your heart
    and touch you as if you've never
    experienced the "Richness" of your poetic touch... :spinstar:


    Brother...I'm doting on this one.../ Beautiful flow!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was deep. Seasons and reasons. Sometimes reasons can be misconstrued, often a light can be shown to clear murky waters, if one seeks it. This was "rich" in its layers, as well as in its concept. Feelin the flow of it.
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank u sistah Angel for the warm wordz

    Thank u sistah Sage u really know how to touch a brutha
    ya words run deep inside me and i may add ur poetry is
    awesome and divine sistah .

    Thank u watz indeed it can help guide one to clearly see
    the path way ya words mean a lot to me so sweet sistah
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    reaching out to the world
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You keep reaching my brother I think they can feel you! This was a work of art. :bowdown:
     
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    Rich,

    I agree with SAGE wholeheartedly on this one. This piece is probably my favorite of yours. It was felt not read. Thank you for sharing.
     
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    Okay, I admit...you never sease to amaze me, because you come from too many angels ----------> (do you have several different personalitys?) cause that be to much comming out of one head :spin: ...this was a awesome piece and my thanks to you for sharing, as you always do.
     
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    Very cool $$RICH$$. Keep doin your thang man.
     
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