Black Poetry : PASSES ME BY

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  1. Queen Of Poetry

    Queen Of Poetry Active Member MEMBER

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    Time just passes me by
    As I look upon the Lord
    Tears roll down my face
    I have lived my life so bad
    Time Just passes me by
    I dont realize it yet
    But everything I have done
    In my life will lead to my death
    The reason I die will be because
    I wasnt willing to change
    And Time just passes me by
    And passes me by and by again
    I hope the Lord sees some good in me
    I hope the Lord know there is good in me
    Hope he doesnt pass me by
    As I pass by with time
    My heart flys and lays in the dirt
    Time just passes me by​
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Queen of Poetry
    If I haven't welcomed you here yet...allow me to do so now, It's good to have you as part of our family, welcome sister.
    I felt this piece...and might add, the only one that passes you by...is You! and the only one can change that is...You
    I like the piece poet, thanks for sharing
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW!!!
    That was so amazing!!!
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I loved reading that piece nice work Queen. keep the flows coming.:welldone:
     
  5. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DANG MY SISTAH MOST OF EVERY THING IN THAT POEM THAT U WROUGHT JUS DESCRIDE ME AND THE WAY HOW I FEEL, YO I LUV IT
    DERRS SO MUCH TRUTHS IN DAT DROP
    SO FLO ON WIT NONSTOP
    AND I HOPE GOD STILLZ SEEZ GOOD IN ME
    DIS YO SISTAH JUS SHOWIN SUM LUV


    BLACKLUV AND BP
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deeply felt , no more wasted time i love this drop flow on
     
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