Black Poetry : Pass The J

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Sista Steele, Mar 3, 2003.

  1. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your smile like wine
    Sings deep through my mind
    With traces of dust in heaven

    Missing you
    Has me feeling blue
    Our love will not be forgotten

    You captured my soul
    Surrendered in whole
    A movement of time will endure

    Deep anguish fills wide
    I can’t loose my pride
    My fears will seduce and allure

    c 2002 ST
     
  2. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nicely written, Sista Steele!
    hope you get passed the J.
    God bless!
     
  3. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "You captured my soul
    Surrendered in whole
    A movement of time will endure"

    dope lines great piece

    i love ya work

    one luv
     
  4. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hehe - skrybe, thank you.

    Mind - thanks for your response.

    I appreciate the luv yall give. I always keep ya in mind when I'm reading up on the boards...to give luv back where it's very much deserved.
     
  5. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love this peace. I wish there was more to it.
    You really know how to scribe a tyte flow Sista.
    I like the opening lines best.
    Great peace.

    *Emma*
     
  6. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    pride sometimes make you lonely
    but in the end you have to do what makes you happy

    deep piece
    what do you do?

    DSS
     
  7. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I pass the J DSS. Thank you for reading me.

    Euphoria I wish I had more to put into this one too. It's wierd though, you feel when a write is comming on and when it ends.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    when da heart show self love one's
    always pass da j .....u scribe a masterpiece
     
  9. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OOOOOOOOOOOOOOH GURRRRRL!

    You know we been scribing in the same vibe lately...so pass da j this way...oops! :D Did I say that out loud?

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
  10. Kimdricka

    Kimdricka Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm like Euphoria, i really liked the opening lines. very very nice flow.

    Kim
     
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