Quiet Poetry Lounge : Pass me not.....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by miomina1, May 19, 2004.

  1. miomina1

    miomina1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My eyes are tired, oh Lord
    When can they close, for good?
    I've seen to many things and lived, so many ways
    And I can't even tell evil from good

    My body, is riddled with aches and pain
    My mind, Lord is filled with worry
    I have no control of my thoughts and soul
    And I do wish you Lord, to please hurry

    My heart is seeping with vengence, Oh Lord
    I think I'm giving it all up, again
    Dear Lord give peace, make the voices all cease
    I'm fighting a battle I can't win
     
  2. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can definitely feel this ma. Keep them coming.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    on point felt this piece
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feelin this
    very nice flow
    thanks for sharing
    Angel
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was very touching and it surely is heartfelt.
     
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