Black Poetry : Parting Is The Sweetest Sorrow In His Mind

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  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It’s been said that love is blind

    When it’s gone, we reflect on
    whether we could have done
    something or said anything to
    sweet-talk it into staying around

    But in truth, love sees exactly
    what the heart allows it to see
    and feels what it desires to feel…

    This, a mutual interaction, is no exception;
    there was and is a purpose to the

    WE
    & the
    US
    in poetical love terms

    written,
    spoken,
    &
    felt…

    but…

    no purposeful lines of passion
    sought written over two souls
    can ever replace what love means
    if believed, not merely thought,
    to be true

    So there are
    EYES now very wide open
    to a
    SOUL that was once very wide shut

    Now the floodgates of emotions are
    spilling all over in his mind

    Ironic isn’t it?

    The beginning has no end
    as words expressed to like minds
    happened over a kewl jazzman’s
    song…

    intensifying your poetical
    "what if" dreams and wishes
    to love
    your love poet

    e~x~c~l~u~s~i~v~e~l~y

    perhaps even without much thought
    of whether he could dream within
    your same dream of WE

    l~i~t~e~r~a~l~l~y

    So he continues to sing along with
    the chorus of your heart beats…

    s~i~n~c~e~r~e~l~y

    &
    from the
    deepest of his depths

    from where he writes to
    keep two together as one

    m~e~n~t~a~l~l~y

    and his words are
    symphonic to your heart’s
    soul—thus an inevitable
    capturing of

    his autographed
    quality love scribe
    that
    seals your dreamy fate

    u~n~c~o~n~s~c~i~o~u~s~l~y

    &

    s~u~b~l~i~m~i~n~a~l~l~y

    Unknowingly, you became
    a part of him that no one else
    nor even he, could see since
    he didn’t know until now
    that

    parting is the sweetest
    sorrow in his mind
    and in
    your own mind
    &
    you both
    believe this to be true

    For that reason…

    he
    simply
    asks
    of
    you

    to keep him within your
    mental confines so that he
    can always be a part
    of your life
    &
    G~R~O~W as your
    feelings do for he
    who remains

    M~O~V~E~D
    as he is today, tomorrow,
    and forever…

    Then there will never be a need
    for him to feel such bittersweet
    parting sorrow in his mind
    again…

    ©GQINC2K2
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ

    This is a very mellow piece that speaks volumes! I'm lovin' it brotha... keep on doin' the great things that you do!


    N2 :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    GQ

    loud & clear ya heard in dis piece
    of truth and u wonder what if
    as too what i could have done
    man ya dead on point...:rolleyes:
     
  4. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very Rich piece poet!

    I feel parting can be the sweetist part of sorrow.
    Tyte scribe poet! tyte!:)
     
  5. MapleXtract

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    Well...

    ...my Gentleman
    of Quality. You know
    you never cease to amaze
    me? It wouldn't surprise me
    if you even amazed yourself,
    poet. This piece is definitely
    where it's at and I felt it
    somewhere around right here...:heart:
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Still trying to catch that one.
    But I get what you're saying, I guess
    Like you luv your cyber buddies or something, hee hee hee
    Go ahead GQ it's all in your mental.
    Sincerely,
    Desert Storm
     
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